The Official Writing Challenge
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08/07/09
Nice writing...I liked how you showed the "other side" of being an adult. With freedom there is also responsibility.
08/12/09
What a wise, wonderful mother this young man had!...What an awakening for a young man who had previously had everything done for him! Welcome to the Adult World! Good story, right on target. Hope lots of "would-be" adults (male or female) take heed. They'll find out that being an adult means responsibility--no more "nice-guy" Mom to be the slave of the house...Yeah! for the mother...Great story...Helen
08/12/09
Childhood is in the receiving. Adulthood is in the giving!