The Official Writing Challenge
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I like the way you have alternated between what is happening with Callie and then separately, but at the same time, what the angels are doing. Very cleverly written! Laura
Effective portrayal of the power of prayer and spiritual warfare through your story...excellent!
Interesting story. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks!
I loved the ending: Lilly was distracted by the gentle whisper of angel wings blending into the breeze... This was a great reminder that there is a spiritual world out there that we pretty much ignore. Very creative story. Good job!
very grabbed my attention and held it!
Very interesting perspective on storms. Very creative!
Huge Congratulations on your 1st place ribbon, Kathryn!! Very. Well. Done! :)
One of the best entries I read this week. Excellent writing. Congrats on your well-deserved win.
Congratulations! I have never experienced a tornado. I do live at the base of three volcanoes, though. It is awesome to feel the protection of God in our times of needs.
I loved the story. It's hard to believe you're a begining writer. It is very reminiscent of Frank Peretti's "This Present Darkness" series. Great insight into spiritual warfare and the duties of angels.