The Official Writing Challenge
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07/23/09
Some good lessons here.

Try to very your sentence structure and the way you present things a bit. I felt like I was reading the same thing, just with different names a few times.

Over all, a great entry with a very important lesson!
07/25/09
Wonderful message. And most of us would love to have a few "do-overs", wouldn't we?