The Official Writing Challenge
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What a tender and descriptive story of this beautiful relationship between father and daughter...very good writing!
Awww, I like this. Always Daddy's little girl. Well-written.
What a lovely story, well written. Thanks.
this is such a lovely peice. I love the title as it is like a window on the authors relationship with his daughter. I also like the transition and the wat the changes from child to adult are explored. It is a heartwarming peice and very well written.
Congratulations on placing in EC with this lovely relationship story from the father's viewpoint.
well done. You are moving on up!
Sweet. Love the father's POV. Congrats on EC.
This is such a sweet and tender depiction of a wonderful father/daughter bond! Congratulations on your EC!!
What a beautiful glimpse into the loving relationship between father and daughter. Beautifully written story! It touched my heart. Congratulations on your well-deserved win! I look forward to reading more of your work!
This had my eyes welling up, in it I was enveloped. My two successful teenagers have sluffed me off for those exact boys. Your description was wonderful and captured what a Father feels when he is replaced by the years. Thanks.