The Official Writing Challenge
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07/20/09
Sounds like you are doing wonderful things in your neighborhood for Jesus. Thank you for sharing, and I am praying for much fruit!
07/20/09
What a great way to spend your summer. It's a great challenge to the rest of us. You present it as a sort of report, which is good, but you tend to repeat a point by saying it a little differently in the next sentence. You can tighten it up by combining these.