The Official Writing Challenge
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I liked your descriptions in this piece. You've appealed to all the senses, and the vividness provided by the detail speaks to how much of an impact your Mamaw had on you. I hope that you took pictures when you got of the swing! Good job.
What a lovely peice of writing. So descriptive and so warmly written.You have paced it well and spread it out with the paragraphs. I am sure that if not this time you will soon be on the winners board and moving to the next level. I look forward to reading more of your work.
Beautiful, almost poetic descriptions in this piece. I could visualize the scene clearly. Great work.
This was a lovely piece. It stirred my own fond memories of time spent at Grandma's house. The pace, the rhythm, and your warm descriptions made it very enjoyable to read.
Hi Kim. I just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, The Swing, actually did very well in the Summer Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 10th in that Level.

The competition is always intense in Level 1, so you deserve a pat on the back. :-)

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

Again, well done!

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)