The Official Writing Challenge
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like this piece and I enjoyed reading it. The third paragraph just after the spoken part seems a little confusing about the food and the dad and daughter. I wonder if it got a bit jumbled in the editing. tahnk you
This is a great start! A little editing (maybe even a little more - you do have 750 words) and this piece would really shine. Try to draw your reader into your writing so that they identify with your MC (main character). You've got a good concept to work with here - keep writing!