The Official Writing Challenge
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Indeed, there are many special miracles that God sprinkles throughout our lives, sometimes it seems as if we truly don't deserve them and sometimes we crave them. Good thoughts.
You definitely reminded us of our first priority. You might have included a few more twilight-specific experiences, but it was clearly written and easy to understand.
I'm sure there is a little typo in the word (trouble) I am the queen of typo's however!:) A very good article. Truly enjoyed it!
Though I found this to be a little light on the topic, I liked the message conveyed. With a little editing and a reduction of the over used word "life", this could be a great testimony.
Your story gave me cause to think about my life - where I've been and where I'm going. I recognized a lot of repetition and more than one typo. When I get ready to hit that "submit" button, I personally panic. Did I remember this or do I have a typo? I can't stress enough in any writing, the importance of a good, clean, typo-free product. Excellent message in this story. Keep writing! Blessings to you. Laura