The Official Writing Challenge
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This sounds like an Arabian Song of Solomon. (: I know the stretched feeling the girl was experiencing. I hope they have a long time together.

I noticed some places where the first lines of your poetry were not capitalized, unless they were meant to be part of the preceeding one...

I love fantasy and exotic elements. Keep imagining. Good luck on Thursday.
06/16/09
I love this. The emotions are strong and passionate. The love of the prince and the maiden is beautifully described. You'll be a great writer/storyteller.