The Official Writing Challenge
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06/16/09
You have the kernel of a good story here, but instead of telling the facts, it would be great to hear the whole story.
06/16/09
Always neat to read of other people's blessings. This would be an enjoyable devotional, tied in with a few extra details to let the reader join the MC in the trials and blessings.

Thanks for sharing this piece of writing. :)