The Official Writing Challenge
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06/14/09
The idea of us storing our treasures in Heaven must make God laugh out loud, (or grieve out loud). When will we get back to the basics and do that which will glorify Him and not ourselves? Great thoughts.
06/15/09
I like this piece. The only thing that might need a bit of work is that the ending is a little abbrupt. though you may have done this on purpose. Good job!
06/16/09
Nice job.
06/18/09
Intriguing read! I enjoyed your story a lot - especially the ending. Thank you! And congratulations on being Highly Commended this week!