The Official Writing Challenge
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I think this was very well written. It takes a lot to swollow our pride and admit when we are wrong especially to those we think are inferior.
WOW! I think I'd like a Bumphry-lol. This is very well written, in terms of good characterization, you made me connect and identify with him in a short story that could be expanded. This is very well done!
Good job. You caught me with the first line.
Hi Gloria. I just wanted to leave a quick note to congratulate you on your Highly Commended award in Level 1 (you placed 4th), and to let you know you also did extremely well overall, ranking 31st out of all the entries for the week.

Once again, it was a big week of entries, so you really deserve an extra pat on the back. If you would like to see the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August. Its going to be an amazing time of inspiration, information and encouragement. (If Ive already mentioned that to you, forgive me. Were just so excited about letting members know about this great gathering.)

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)