The Official Writing Challenge
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I'm still confused about how many children you live with, but I love the dynamics here! Your nieces and nephews seem to be educating their aunt. What excellent interplay between all of you.

This article has a great devotional theme. Why not expand it with more discourse and perhaps some scripture? Keep writing, as you have a definite writer's touch.
This is a lovely opening. I did want to read more, to know about this Aunt and all her different nieces and nephews, this can most definitely be expanded! Great stuff, thanks for sharing!
interesting the split. I think if you could have maybe just described a couple of them in more detail it would have made it more interesting reading