The Official Writing Challenge
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My breath catches, my eyes cloud, because had you known my yesturdays you would understand that today this was exactly what I needed to hear. I fix my heart upon Tomorrow - thanks for the reminder of exactly when that is. God bless!
A lot of valuable advice and wisdom here.
I appreciate that this is to some extent a question of personal preference, but I found that you used an awful lot of commas and that this interrupted the flow of your argument. Something to bear in mind in the future.
a good peice what more can I say?