The Official Writing Challenge
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A realistic situation in which thousands of youth find themselves. Non-existent parental nurturing and desperation are not food for growing up children.

Well written! A good witness tool.
06/02/09
Quite a contrast between dark and light here--good job!

I wonder if the ending was just a teeny bit too soon, too suddent--a little bit unrealistic. Nevertheless, it's wonderful that the MC was able to find the light!
06/03/09
powerful and well written thanks.