The Official Writing Challenge
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05/28/09
I really like the parallel you made of "the Spirit of God was hovering over the surface of the waters"
and "The Spirit of God is hovering....over us." Also your comparison between darkness and light was interesting.

Edit your article for errors, such as correct punctuation and spacing plus an occasional double phrase.

Enjoy the art of writing!
06/01/09
Very encouraging.

I've found that when writing devotionals or Bible studies, you can 'hook' your readers more with a personal anecdote or real-life example. Something to consider for the future.

This is well thought-out and written.