The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful! I only taught one year in a real classroom before wroking at a daycare/preschool. I can completely relate with your character. Well done!
make that "working". *blushes*
I absolutely love the line, "A thought, like a whisper to my heart". It paints such a beautiful picture. I love the repetition of the first paragraph's lines in the ending. Great Job!! ;)
04/24/09
Been there, felt that. While reading this piece, I felt as if you had ripped thoughts out of my brain and spashed them across the screen. Excellent.
Excellent writing, good descriptions, and keeping with the nature of Faithwriters. Good Job; get ready to move up.
04/29/09
Very nice, could feel your tension at meeting such a challenge, could also sense your touch on your crisp clothing!
Pam Ford Davis
04/30/09
Congratulations on your first place win in beginners. I am a teacher at a small church school...even though it is a Christian environment, there are days! You adequately captured the concerns, doubts and victories faced by teachers everywhere.
05/07/09
Hi Anita. Im running a little late this week, but just wanted to leave a quick note to congratulate you on your 1st place win in Level 1, and to also let you know you did extremely well overall, ranking 12th out of all entries for the week. You were just two places off making it into the Editor's Choice.

It was a big week of entries, so you really did exceptionally well. If you would like to see the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=25380

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.
Again, well done. :-)

Hope to see you at the FaithWriters' Conference in August.

With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)