The Official Writing Challenge
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04/16/09
Great voice, very witty, quite fun to read. I liked this a great deal.
I thought at first that the MC was off on a missionary expedition somewhere, but you cleverly misdirected me. This was a fun read with a good message.
04/22/09
I really enjoyed this, can feel the heat, thirst, and the frustration!
Pam Ford Davis
04/22/09
Very funny.