The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/09
I liked how the roller coaster in this piece was both literal and metaphorical.

I've been on the same roller coaster (the metaphorical one), so I could really relate. I like your attitude.
04/13/09
ahhh...I love the part with the child's picture of her teacher.
Thank you for writing this.
04/14/09
This was very good, we spend too much time worrying about those ups and downs of the scale, and forget about how it takes us on an emotional up & down, as well.
04/16/09
Good job! Congratulations on your "Highly Recommend." Great story.
A great revelation-congratulations!