The Official Writing Challenge
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04/11/09
Nice use of the merry-go-round for a comparison to marriage.

An extra space between paragraphs, please, for the sake of your readers' eyes.

Stories of enduring marriages are always inspirational.
04/12/09
I liked this metaphor for the journey of life.
04/14/09
You've had quite a journey on the Merry-Go-Round called earth. Through it all your faith shines! Love that!
04/16/09
Congratulations on your third-place finish. Well done!
04/16/09
Hey.... Congratulations on your level placing!!!!
Congratulations to a fellow beginner!
04/25/09
Hi Nancy. Just a quick note to congratulate you on your excellent win in the Up and Down Challenge. I'm running a bit late with my "well done" message, but wanted to let you know you not only placed 3rd in Level 1, but you also ranked 39th overall. That really is a great result. Well done.

Time to move up to Level 2 (if you haven't done already).

Congratulations again. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)