The Official Writing Challenge
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Lots of research reflected in this piece of teaching!

I felt that it lacked focus, a little bit--maybe expounding more on fewer examples would give it more unity.

I appreciate all the work put into this entry.
Good examples from the Bible! Just as a suggestion, maybe you can consider tightening up all the points a little to collate them into an idea or two to keep the readers focused. On the whole, your article is not bad in making the readers think a little further on the ups and downs of life.