The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved it.
This was very, very neat, griping and suspenseful to the end.
Wonderful. Thank you for sharing. God bless ya, littlelight
Very good! I'm glad it was just a dream...he and his children still have a chance. :)
Good job! My husband needs to read it. Thanks.
Well written - a good reminder that we need to share the gospel more -we may be that last chance for someone.
I like the sausy attitude of the gatekeeper. I could see his face and hear his voice. very colorfu.
Well written. Entertaining but with an urgent message. Glad there's a second chance for the character - before it's too late. Keep writing. Thank you!
Amazing work! It really makes you realize the truth...
Writers mock dream stories sometimes, calling them the easy way of writing, but it seems that God is using them more and more to call the ones He has chosen to Himself. Good characterization.
Wonderfully written!
Loved the effort you put into making both characters real. Drove home the point that we are without excuse. Opportunities abound to respond to the gospel. Well written. Yeggy