The Official Writing Challenge
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Love these intervention of God - fun stories. I expected an angelic appearance - but close. One small thought- you may want to be careful of using specific doctrinal language unless you are writing only for a particular audience. "She prayed fervently, whispered a prayer, cried out to God," etc. clearly conveys your meaning without detracting, confusing, offending, etc. In that way, there are no limitations on the ministry of your story. I love the reminder of how we really should listen to the promptings of the Holy Spirit!
an enjoyable and really well written piece. Great stuff.
Nicely done - fast paced action really moved your story along and kept my attention throughout.