The Official Writing Challenge
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You had me worried at the start our hero might not decide for Christ. I'm glad he did and I'm glad I read your story.
I like the way you used dialogue to progress your story. I, too wondered what the main character would choose. I think it's a very interesting story and I liked the references to David. Does the President actually have a personal chaplin? I hope he does!
I loved this, loved this...what a fun read. The reality is GREAT - not everyone called by God for something snaps to attention ready for action. We can often drag our feet. Good job and prophetic congratulations!