The Official Writing Challenge
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This was really really fun. Your humor is like an underground pool that bubbles up at surprising times.
03/13/09
HI - Excellent love story - like the beach - I could feel my feet walking on the sandy beach - and the warmth of the sun - It is cold where I am - good luck -
03/13/09
This certainly is an adventure! I'm glad they are still in love...
I'd have liked this to have continued further in to the tale. Don't be afraid to use the full scope of the word limit, and let your imagination soar!
You did an excellent job of portraying the tenderness between the couple. Well done.
03/14/09
A cute love story just being, I am sure their marriage will be any but normal. Keep up the great writing.
03/14/09
So, were they left alone on that beach? Why did they not trek along with the rest of the passengers and crew?

Just a couple of questions this mind wondered about.

This was an interesting story of a honeymoon adventure. I'm glad her morale was good.
Sweet love story. Bit difficult to imagine anyone surviving along that particular stretch for two weeks, but after all it is fiction and well told. Keep writing.
03/15/09
Bummer of a vacation....but true love will prevail, right? Very descriptive and creative. Good writing.
Good use of character description. Almost like a scene from survivor. Good job.