The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a great short clip on the adventures of these two friends, I just wish there'd been more to this story, I hardly had time to know the characters before the story was over. Otherwise, pretty good. A tip for improvement, if you'd like, next time, try to bring the reader closer to the characters, instead of telling us that the two are pretty much best friends, show us. Otherwise, good stuff!