The Official Writing Challenge
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02/21/09
This is a cute poem.

One suggestion would be to watch spelling. For example, they're and trapeze.

I like that things ended well for the elephant.
Great description of the environment woven into the forced rhymes. I found the poetic story fun to read. I also liked how it represented daring convictions to do the right thing. Very good!