The Official Writing Challenge
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Well written. Good job.
Wow! I was afraid for the young girl and wondered if my faith would be as strong in this situation! Well done!
Excellently written to invoke the emotions of the reader towards the main character. I liked how it demonstrated the power of prayer and the faithfulness of God to deliver His people from the hand of the enemy.
I could feel the emotion and tension throughout this story.

Just as a tiny note, Aganagi and Pune (which is a city in India) are not Indian names.

Overall, this is very well-written.
Hi Elizabeth. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry, "Not Alone," actually did very well in the India Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 11th in that Level. Competition in Level 1 is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)