The Official Writing Challenge
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What an adventure, wow. The end left me speechless.
Wow! Love the adventure here. This is great! I especially liked the ending. What suspense!
Wow. This is a powerful story.

There were several misused word(descent and purist). Having someone give the story a quick proofread would help catch those since spell check won't.

I really enjoyed this piece. I felt like I was reading an entry at a higher level. Good work.
Creative and suspenseful.
I don't see you remaining in Beginner for long.
Hi Lisa. I just wanted to leave a quick note to congratulate you on your Highly Commended award in Level 1, and to let you know your entry made it into the Highest Rankings placing 25th overall. That's excellent for a Level 1 entrant.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

Congratulations again. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
I have since corrected the mistakes and edited some of the wording. I plan to enter this flash fiction story in a local contest.

Thank you all for your help and encouragement!