The Official Writing Challenge
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02/19/09
Inspirational story that probes at the heart for action. Sometimes the smallest sacrifices can make a significant difference.
02/20/09
Well-written. I enjoyed reading this piece.
02/24/09
A sweet story...nicely done!
02/24/09
I love the heart of your MC. She (he) sounds a lot like Jesus to me. Good job!
02/24/09
I enjoyed reading this. The heart of the MC came through beautifully.
02/24/09
What a wonderful blessing...to Anna and to you!
Try to keep your thoughts in a logical sequence. It seems to jump about in time.
Thank you for sharing this.
02/25/09
Lovely piece - I can feel your passion, Marijo. What a blessing you are to that girl.