The Official Writing Challenge
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Wouldn't it be a blessing if more of our judicial system worked this way and offenders were truly redeemed. Great job with characterization.
Definitely my favorite so far this week. Very well done!
Well-written. The only suggestion I have would have been to put a note at the bottom translating the title. I liked the idea of mercy and redemption here.
Dear friends, roughly translated, Misericordia para el redimible means Mercy for the redeemable one and pobrecillo perdido means lost soul. :) My word count was maxed out.
Hi Duwana. Just wanted to stop by and congratulate you on your 1st Place win in Level 1. That means it's time to move up to Level 2. Well done.

But there's more. You also did very well overall, making it into the Highest Rankings, placing 23rd overall. That's excellent for a Level 1 entrant.

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Congratulations. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)
This was a wonderful story.
Congratulaions on you win.