The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/09
THis was a good step by step testimonial of the journey from hopelessness to hope for your MC. It does appear though that there was a tense shift in there towards the end. Very good narrative.
02/04/09
You did well writing in first person POV. I would have liked a little more description of the sermon or the church meeting. BTW, it's best if you just start with the story...not the info at the top or title.
Well done! Keep writing!
02/05/09
Hi Dalyn. Just wanted to leave a quick note to let you know your entry "One Planted...," actually did very well in the United Kingdom Challenge. Although you didn't receive an award, you made it into the Highest Rankings for Level 1, placing 13th in Level 1. Competition in this level is always very intense, so well done.

If you'd like to check the highest rankings for yourself, you can find them here:
http://www.faithwriters.com/Boards/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=24220

The highest rankings are posted every Thursday evening on the Message Boards.

You definitely deserve a pat on the back. Well done. With love, Deb (Challenge Coordinator)