The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/09
The way you connected your ancestory to the UK and then your heritage with in the Kingdom of God was really good.
I enjoyed your poem.
02/03/09
I like the way you wove your poem from earthly kingdoms into the Kingdom of God. This flowed nicely in rhyme and rhythm.
02/04/09
I enjoyed your poem, and it flowed well! (Actually, the same thought about God's "United Kingdom" crossed my mind when I first saw the topic for this week!) Good job, and blessings on your writing! :)