The Official Writing Challenge
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This certainly sounds like a dream vacation, I wish I had been able to read more of how much they had enjoyed it.

One quick note: "Larry seemed not impressed"

I think you meant, "unimpressed"

^_^

Good job! This was a nice, light read.
02/01/09
I'm jealous of Larry and Gina! :) I wish I could win a free trip to England, too! Blessings on your writing!
02/01/09
What a nice pre-retirement prize to win. Well, better than nice, incredible is a better word.
Good job with the dialogue.