The Official Writing Challenge
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07/25/05
(he-he) frustration kicks in humor. God bless ya, littlelight
07/25/05
From the view point of the car...THAT'S creative! A lot of fun. There was a lot of human speak going on that distracted me from the car's perspective. Maybe a little more visualiztion from the car's point of view...like the driveby of the junkyard or the hot sun in parking lots...just a thought. God Bless and Keep Writing!
Cute and sassy! A novel approach! Enjoyed the car's point view.....