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Suspenseful and inspiring.

Some editing issues in spelling and punctuation distracted me a bit from your writing.

I really liked the final image of the flyover.
WOW! Made me cry. This was so touching.
I'm new to this site but had to say how much I enjoyed your story! It brought tears to my eyes as well! Very nice!
THis is a good picture of a Marine. I thank God for our military men and women.
It is well written.
This is really great. It created a lot of emotion. God bless those who serve our country so unselfishly, and those who they love here in the U.S.A.