The Official Writing Challenge
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01/15/09
Thanks for this heartfelt poem!
Moving message. I appreciated the reminder of how we've been blessed as a nation.

As a fellow poet, I would suggest you work at adding more imagery to this poem, so it speaks to the heart in a way even more moving and inspiring.

Keep up the good work!
I enjoyed reading your feelings about your country. You do certainly live in a great country, even if there are problems.
Blessings,
Norms
For better or for worse, this is the land where God planted us, His people. Thank you for this wonderful poem.