The Official Writing Challenge
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11/21/08
I'm assuming that the last paragraph wasn't supposed to be split in the middle. It threw me for a second, so I reread it.
Otherwise this is a nicely written piece.
11/23/08
I always wanted an Easy Bake Oven!

Feel free to expand your writing to the full 750 words...I'd have loved to "hear" your family as they opened their gifts.