The Official Writing Challenge
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11/10/08
I'm sorry you've had to wait so long for comments. A nice story, well told, with a particularly good ending. Well done.
11/12/08
Very touching! I love the last line... a good lesson for all of us.
11/13/08
Very good story, congratulations on moving up to the next level. You've earned it!
11/13/08
Good job! Great descriptions and it all wrapped up well. Congrats on moving on up.
What a wonderful, heart lifting story. Congratulations on your high rankings! Keep up the great writing!