The Official Writing Challenge
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10/23/08
What an awesome story. It has so many truths in it. The children do, indeed, lead us...if we pay attention. Good job!
This is beautiful! Very touching and I love the sincere giving spirit of the little boy. If we could be more selfless and concerned with others more often what a different world this would be. God bless. Nice job!
10/26/08
We could sll do with being more like Billy.
You almost brought me to tears with this one. I love Billy's heart. What a blessing he is. And what a blessing you are for sharing this love-filled story. Thank you... :)
10/30/08
I was pretty sure this was yours, because your heart shines through Billy's! I like the way you captured both the enthusiasm of a child (when Billy approaches his parents) and the humility of one who wants to love like Jesus. Billy doesn't share what he did for Mrs. Money with anyone, he just shares his time over Christmases to come. He gave her dignity and love wrapped in one simple gesture. Beautiful!