The Official Writing Challenge
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07/18/05
That was beautiful. I also liked the presentation of the Lord dwelt among us. How glorious! God bless ya, littlelight
Creative and well told story of someone learning a practical lesson. Good story for teens and adults more concerned with their own comforts.
07/20/05
Very nicely done :)
07/21/05
Very well done, what an interesting story. Thank you.
I agree with Ms Miles that you should take a step up into Intermediate. Very nicely done. Thanks for sharing.