The Official Writing Challenge
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Lovely, descriptive writing.

My only suggestion is that this may have rambled a bit. If you were to organize it into paragraphs, it might flow more smoothly.

This had an overall modd of serenity that was very appealing.
That's "mood"!

This was an enjoyable read!
The message held in a Christmas tree that Christmas is approaching.

Keep writing and practice separating the paragraphs. This will not only prevent your writing from running all together ---- Also, for the reader it is a much easier and enjoyable read.

Thank you for sharing this.