The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting outlook on the life of a child of God whose home is not of this world.
07/19/05
Imaginative writing, I believe the first paragraph or two could have been drafted a little tighter with the wording. God bless, littlelight
07/20/05
This was a very good read with great imagination and color.
07/20/05
I REALLY enjoyed this!! :)
07/21/05
Imaginative, a little organizational problem, and in need of a good peer editor. Thanks for posting.
I loved it! A very moving piece. Thanks for sharing!
07/23/05
I liked the whole concept of Sandra's upbringing. The story needs to tighten up quite a bit, somehow it feels a little jerky from paragraph to paragraph. The ending was great though, much smoother and rounder, it would actually make a wonderful beginning. God Bless and keep writing!
07/25/05
I like the way you started and finished with the thought 'Home is where the heart is.' A lovely picture of a 'free spirit', and a great take on the topic of camping. God bless you, Littlelight!
07/25/05
I love the description of the child playing, the way she fearlessly revels in discovering her environment.