The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nice story--Charlie is a great character, and I'd love to get to know him better.
I was sucked in from the beginning...and could feel the pain. Such good writing! Keep it up.
Connie, I'm going to use this story for the Front Page showcase for the week of Dec. 29. Look for it on the Faithwriters home page, and congratulations!
This great, descriptive story grabbed me and carried me through to the end. Charlie is the dear friend everyone wants and needs. I felt the MC's emotions along with her. Congratulations on being the featured article. I suggest that you bump yourself up a level or two.
This is beautiful. It made me cry. Congratulations on your well written story. I'm glad it was showcased.
Its touchingly beautiful stories like this one that makes me keep writing. I too felt tears well up,feeling the emotion of your loss and the way God ministered His comfort through these beautiful friends!