The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting approach--using bits of Christmas carols and other songs to witness.

All-dialogue pieces are hard to do well--consider add descriptions of the action, the speakers, the surroundings, in order to put your reader in the scene. As it is, it's just back-and-forth words.

I liked the way you found just the right carols to speak to the man's heart.
I like this interesting approach to tell about Jesus and His birth and why we sing carols. You were very creative in finding the right carols to answer the questions.
A very unique approach! I agree with Jan - a bit of narrative would spice it up, but I enjoyed this just like it is, too.
I like your angle on this. I'd be interested to know where the man is from who didn't know carol...
I love the approach you took with the topic. Wonderful and touching devotional
I'm glad that the man wanted to receive Christ but I think it would definitely be confusing if someone was talking to me like that. LOL But a very creative take on the topic. Nice work!