The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
Very interesting glimpse into Chinese culture!
You told a beautiful story in this piece. I really enjoyed your story. Well done!
10/13/08
This was a very enjoyable read. Welcome to FW challenge. I am excited to read more.
10/13/08
This was lovely. Nicely done.
10/13/08
I love this look into a culture different from my own at Christmas time. Good story-line, and a well told tale of your MC's introduction to Jesus. Congrats on a great first entry!
10/15/08
It is intersting how a knowledge of Jesus and his love can change an individual and you brought this out very well.
10/26/08
I know Chang Chang! She lived in the next stairwell to me. I didn't realize she'd gone to a Christmas concert and been offered hope though. And she rides her bike to and from school, even though she finishes the evening session at about 9pm because of their extra classes.

Beautiful writing. The picture of Chang Chang sinking into her seat in the car contrasting with the chirpy music and red and white corny Santa hats was especially descriptive.