The Official Writing Challenge
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10/09/08
Mmmmm, a turkey dinner sounds wonderful right now!

A lot of what you describe is a very familiar, traditional Christmas...if you expand this, consider adding something distinctive or unique. And your last sentence, while very true, doesn't seem to go with the rest of the story--it's more like the beginning sentence of its own separate essay.

I'd love to read more of this!