The Official Writing Challenge
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09/04/08
HA! I loved this! Very clever writing. I enjoyed the twist at the end.
09/04/08
Cute! I didn't recognize the real identity of the MC's till the end, which I'm sure, is what you intended. Nicely done!
09/04/08
I loved this piece. I can really see this taking place. Thank you for sharing.
Awesome and hilarious!

Good show!

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

Very cute! Very realistic!
LOL! Grown men acting like little boys. :-) Very cute and nicely written!
09/06/08
Very funny story. Make sure you spell the word right - your chicken - should be you're. I loved this. Good job!
09/08/08
I loved it! Very creative....you've got quite the sense of humor. Great job....I wouldn't be surprised if you placed for this one! :)
09/08/08
HAHAHA.. this was great! Fun story, great twist! Very creative.
09/08/08
Okay ... this one was soooo good! I thoroughly enjoyed it from beginning to end. An absolute hoot! Great writing.
09/09/08
Very funny and creative--no other pieces like it this week, as far as I can tell. Well done!
09/10/08
HAH! I love this twisty tale - the ending was awesome. One note - 4th line down: your should be you're (you are).
Super job on the topic. :) Cat