The Official Writing Challenge
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08/30/08
This is outstanding!
08/31/08
Beautifully done - wonderful message, rhyme, meter. This blessed me.
08/31/08
Lovely, with a wonderful point and so easy to follow. Good job.
You do so well with poetry. A joy to read. :)
Very nice.

May God bless.

Sincerely,
Dan Blankenship

09/01/08
Well written and a good message, too.
09/02/08
Love it! The 2nd to last stanza is my favorite - I got chills. Great rhymes and meter, and a wonderful message. Thank you for sharing this!
09/04/08
Great job, and a really good lesson!
09/04/08
Wow, just loved it. thanks