The Official Writing Challenge
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I can "see" the pictures that go with this as a children's book. It evokes warm memories. I could read it to my grandchildren again and again!
07/11/05
I agree, a child could sure learn to read the word "beaches" to perfection, as well as learn alot about them.
Fun article.
God bless, littlelight
BEACHES....A fantastic read and teaching poem for young children written in an easy-to-comprehend tone.... Would not look out of place in a Children's colour picture book. A great entry that deserves a prize!!!
07/13/05
What a fun poem to read with a group of children. Thank you.
07/13/05
I totally agree with the comments about this being a great children's book.
07/14/05
Very nice, has that Dr. Seuss feel :)
Exactly, Shari! Dr. Seuss for sure! I read this to my hubby and we both had a good laugh! Cute idea. I would never have thought of doing this. :-)
07/16/05
Thanks for sharing your beautiful talent. I, too, can't wait to read this with my grandchildren. They love the beach and this will be a delight to them.